s Rules--'Co-opted members may be eligible as such; such
members to continue to serve for such time as'--and so on.
(4) Even in the purely Celtic areas, only in two or three cases
do the Bishops bear Celtic names.
For 'cases' read 'dioceses.'
_Instance._ In most instances the players were below their form.
But what were they playing at? Instances?
_Character--Nature._ There can be no doubt that the accident was
caused through the dangerous nature of the spot, the hidden
character of the by-road, and the utter absence of any warning
or danger signal.
Mark the foggy wording of it all! And yet the man hit something and broke
his neck! Contrast that explanation with the verdict of a coroner's jury
in the West of England on a drowned postman--'We find that deceased met
his death by an act of God, caused by sudden overflowing of the river
Walkhan and helped out by the scandalous neglect of the way-wardens.'
The Aintree course is notoriously of a trying nature.
On account of its light character, purity and age, Usher's whiskey
is a whiskey that will agree with you.
_Order._ The mesalliance was of a pronounced order.
_Condition._ He was conveyed to his place of residence in an
intoxicated condition.
'He was carried home drunk.'
_Quality and Section._ Mr ----, exhibiting no less than five works,
all of a superior quality, figures prominently in the oil section.
This was written of an exhibition of pictures.
_Degree._ A singular degree of rarity prevails in the earlier
editions of this romance.
That is Jargon. In prose it runs simply 'The earlier editions of this
romance are rare'--or 'are very rare'--or even (if you believe what I take
leave to doubt), 'are singularly rare'; which should mean that they are
rarer than the editions of any other work in the world.
Now what I ask you to consider about these quotations is that in each the
writer was using Jargon to shirk prose, palming off periphrases upon us
when with a little trouble he could have gone straight to the point. 'A
singular degree of rarity prevails,' 'the accident was caused through the
dangerous nature of the spot,' 'but such is by no means the case.' We may
not be capable of much; but we can all write better than that, if we take
a little trouble. In place of, 'the Aintree course is of a trying nature'
we can surely say 'Aintree is a trying course'
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