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third line has 3 beats, the rest 4. The scanning runs on without break to the end of the stanza, so that each stanza is rather one long line rhymed in passage than four lines with rhymes at the ends.'--B has an autograph of the poem as it came to be corrected ('83 or after), without the above note and dated 'Mount St. Mary, Derbyshire, Apr. '78'.--Text follows B.--The injurious rhymes are partly explained in the old note. St. 9. _Shorten sail_. The seamanship at fault: but this ex- pression may be glossed by supposing the boatswain to have sounded that call on his whistle. St. 12. _Cheer's death_, i.e. despair. St, 14. _It is even seen_. In a letter May 30, '78, he ex- plains: 'You mistake the sense of this as I feared it would be mistaken. I believed Hare to be a brave and con- scientious man, what I say is that _even_ those who seem unconscientious will act the right part at a great push. . . . About _mortholes_ I wince a little.' St. 26. _A starlight-wender_, i.e. The island was so Marian that the folk supposed the Milky Way was a fingerpost to guide pilgrims to the shrine of the Virgin at Walsingham. _And one_, that is Duns Scotus the champion of the Im- maculate Conception. See Sonnet No. 20. St. 27. _Well wept_. Grammar is as in 'Well hit! well run!' &c. The meaning 'You do well to weep'. St. 28. _O Hero savest_. Omission of relative pronoun at its worst. = _O Hero that savest_. The prayer is in a mourner's mouth, who prays that Christ will have saved her hero, and in stanza 29 the grammar triumphs. 18. 'THE MAY MAGNIFICAT. (Sprung rhythm, four stresses in each line of the first couplet, three in each of the second. Stonyhurst, May '78.') Autograph in A.--Text from later autograph in B. He wrote to me: 'A Maypiece in which I see little good but the freedom of the rhythm.' In penult stanza _cuckoo-call_ has its hyphen deleted in B, leaving the words separate. 19. 'BINSEY POPLARS, felled 1879. Oxford, March 1879.' Auto- graph in A. Text from B, which alters four places. l. 8 _weed-winding_: an early draft has _weed-wounden_. 20. 'DUNS SCOTUS'S OXFORD. Oxford, March 1879.' Auto- graph in A. Copy in B agrees but dates 1878. 21. 'HENRY PURCELL. (Alexandrine: six stresses to the line. Oxford, April 1879.)' Autograph in A with argument as printed. Copy in B is uncorrected except that it adds the word _fresh_ in last line. '"Have fair fallen." _Have_ is the sing, imperative (or optative if
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