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wrote that into B.--In that final version the charm and freshness have disappeared: and his emendation in evading the clash of _ply_ and _reply_ is awkward; also the fourteen lines now contain seven _whats_. I have therefore taken A1 for the text, and have ventured, in line 8, to restore _how to_, in the place of _what_, from the original version which exists in H. In 'The Spirit of Man' I gave a mixture of A1 and A2. In line 5 the word _soul_ is in H and A1: but A2 and B have _heart_. _Father_ in second line was the Rev. Father Gerard himself. He tells the whole story in a letter to me. 28. 'AT A WEDDING. (Sprung rhythm.) Bedford, Lancashire, Oct. 21, '79.' A. Autograph uncorrected in B, but title changed to that in text. 29. 'FELIX RANDAL. (Sonnet: sprung and outriding rhythm; six-foot lines.) Liverpool, Apr. 28, '80.' A. Text from A with the two corrections of B. The comma in line 5 after _impatient_ is omitted in copy in B. 30. 'BROTHERS. (Sprung rhythm; three feet to the line; lines free-ended and not overrove; and reversed or counter- pointed rhythm allowed in the first foot.) Hampstead, Aug. 1880.' Five various drafts exist. A1 and A2 both of Aug. '80. B was copied by me from A1, and author's emendations of it overlook those in A2. Text therefore is from A 2 except that the first seven lines, being rewritten in margin afresh (and confirmed in letter of Ap. '81 to Canon Dixon), as also corrections in lines 15-18, these are taken. But the B corrections of lines 22, 23, almost certainly imply forgetfulness of A^. In last line B has correction _Dearly thou canst be kind_; but the intention of _I'll cry_ was original, and has four MSS. in its favour. 31. 'SPRING AND FALL. (Sprung rhythm.) Lydiate, Lan- cashire, Sept. 7, 1880.' A. Text and title from B, which corrects four lines, and misdates '81. There is also a copy in D, Jan. '81, and see again Apr. 6, '81. In line 2 the last word is _unleafing_ in most of the MSS. An attempt to amend the second rhyme was unsuccessful. 32. 'SPELT FROM SIBYL'S LEAVES. (Sonnet: sprung rhythm: a rest of one stress in the first line.)' Autograph in A-- another later in B, which is taken for text. Date unre- corded, lines 5, 6, _astray_ thus divided to show the rhyme.--6. _throughther_, an adj., now confined to dialect. It is the speech form of _through-other_, in which shape it eludes pursuit in the Oxford dictionary. Dr. Murray compares Ger. _durch einander_. Mr. Craig
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