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r of St. Alphonsus Rodriguez, a laybrother of our Order, who for 40 years acted as hall porter to the College of Palma in Majorca; he was, it is believed, much favoured by God with heavenly light and much persecuted by evil spirits. The sonnet (I say it snorting) aims at being intelligible.' And on Oct. 9, '88, 'I am obliged for your criticisms, "con- tents of which noted", indeed acted on. I have improved the sestet. . . . (He defends 'hew') ... at any rate whatever is markedly featured in stone or what is like stone is most naturally said to be hewn, and to _shape_, itself, means in old English to hew and the Hebrew _bara_ to create, even, properly means to hew. But life and living things are not naturally said to be hewn: they grow, and their growth is by trickling increment. . . . The (first) line now stands "Glory is a flame off exploit, so we say ".' 50. 'JUSTUS ES, &c. Jer. xii. 1 (for title), March 17,'89.' Autograph in A.--Similar autograph in B, which reads line 9, _Sir, life on thy great cause_. Text from A, which seems the later, being written in the peculiar faint ink of the corrections in B, and embodying them.--Early drafts in H. 51. 'To R. B. April 22, '89.' Autograph in A. This, the last poem sent to me, came on April 29.--No other copy, but the working drafts in H.--In line 6 the word _moulds_ was substituted by me for _combs_ of original, when the sonnet was published by Miles; and I leave it, having no doubt that G. M. H. would have made some such alteration. 52. 'SUMMA.' This poem had, I believe, the ambitious design which its title suggests. What was done of it was destroyed, with other things, when he joined the Jesuits. My copy is a contemporary autograph of 16 lines, written when he was still an undergraduate; I give the first four. A. 53. _What being_. Two scraps in H. I take the apparently later one, and have inserted the comma in line 3. 54. 'ON THE PORTRAIT, &c. Monastereven, Co. Kildare, Christmas, '86.' Autograph with full title, no corrections, in A. Early drafts in H. 55. _The sea took pity_. Undated pencil scrap in H. 56. ASHBOUGHS (my title). In H in two versions; first as a curtal sonnet (like 13 and 22) on same sheet with the four sonnets 44-47, and preceding them: second, an apparently later version in the same metre on a page by itself; with expanded variation from seventh line, making thirteen lines for eleven. I print the whole of this second MS., and have p
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