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orrections from B. At nine lines from end, _Though this_, A has _Now this_, and _Now_ is deliberately preferred in H.--B has some un- corrected miscopyings of A. _O for, now, charms of_ A is already a correction in H. I should like a comma at end of first line of 5th stanza and an interjection-mark at end of that stanza. 24. 'MORNING MIDDAY AND EVENING SACRIFICE. Oxford, Aug. '79.' Autograph in A. The first stanza reproduced after p. 70. Copied by me into B, where it received cor- rection. Text follows B except in lines 19 and 20, where the correction reads _What Death half lifts the latch of, What hell hopes soon the snatch of_. And punctuation is not all followed: original has comma after the second _this_ in lines 5 and 6. On June 30, '86, G. M. H. wrote to Canon Dixon, who wished to print the first stanza alone in some anthology, and made _ad hoc_ alterations which I do not follow. The original 17th line was _Silk-ashed but core not cooling_, and was altered because of its obscurity. 'I meant (he wrote) to compare grey hairs to the flakes of silky ash which may be seen round wood embers . . . and covering a core of heat. . . .' _Your offer- ing, with despatch, of_ is said like 'your ticket', 'your reasons', 'your money or your life . . .' It is: 'Come, your offer of all this (the matured mind), and without delay either!' 25. 'ANDROMEDA. Oxford, Aug. 12, '79.' A--which B cor- rects in two places only. Text rejects the first, in line 4 _dragon_ for _dragon's_: but follows B in line 10, where A had _Air, pillowy air_. There is no comma at _barebill_ in any MS., but a gap and sort of caesural mark in A. In a letter Aug. 14, '79, G. M. H. writes: 'I enclose a sonnet on which I invite minute criticism. I endeavoured in it at a more Miltonic plainness and severity than I have any- where else. I cannot say it has turned out severe, still less plain, but it seems almost free from quaintness and in aiming at one excellence I may have hit another.' 26. 'THE CANDLE INDOORS. (Common rhythm, counter- pointed.) Oxford, '79.' A. Text takes corrections of B, which adds 'companion to No.' 10. A has in line 2 _With a yellowy_, and 5 _At that_. 27. 'THE HANDSOME HEART. (Common rhythm counter- pointed.) Oxford, '79.' A1.--In Aug. of the same year he wrote that he was surprised at my liking it, and in deference to my criticism sent a revise, A2.--Subsequently he recast the sonnet mostly in the longer 6-stress lines, and
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