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now that words like _charm_ and _enchantment_ will not do: the thought is of beauty as of something that can be physically kept and lost and by physical things only, like keys; then the things must come from the _mundus muliebris_; and thirdly they must not be markedly oldfashioned. You will sec that this limits the choice of words very much indeed. However I shall make some changes. _Back_ is not pretty, but it gives that feeling of physical constraint which I want.' And in Oct. '86 to R. W. D., 'I never did anything more musical'. 37. 'MARY MOTHER OF DIVINE GRACE COMPARED TO THE AIR WE BREATHE. Stonyhurst, May '83.' Autograph in A.--Text and title from later autograph in B. Taken by Dean Beeching into 'A Book of Christmas Verse' 1895 and thence, incorrectly, by Orby Shipley in 'Carmina Mariana'. Stated in a letter to R. W. D. June 25, '83, to have been written to 'hang up among the verse com- positions in the tongues. ... I did a piece in the same metre as _Blue in the mists all day_.' Note Chaucer's account of the physical properties of the air, 'House of Fame', ii. 256, seq. 38. 'To WHAT SERVES MORTAL BEAUTY? (Common rhythm highly stressed: sonnet.) Aug. 23, '85.' Autograph in A.--Another autograph in B with a few variants from which A was chosen, the deletion of alternatives incom- plete. Thirdly a copy sent to R. W. D., apparently later than A, but with errors of copy. The text given is guided by this version in D, and _needs_ in line 9 is substituted there for the _once_ in A and B, probably because of _once_ in line 6.--Original draft exists in H, on same page with 39 and 40. The following is his signature at this date: Your affectionate friend Gerard M. Hopkins S.J. May 29 1885 Transcriber's note: This signature and date is displayed as a handwritten image in the original. 39. SOLDIER. 'Clongower, Aug. 1885.' Autograph in H, with a few corrections which I have taken for lines 6 and 7, of which the first draft runs: It fancies; it deems; dears the artist after his art; So feigns it finds as, &c. The MS. marks the caesural place in ten of the lines in line 2, between _Both_ and _these_. l 3, at the full stop. l. 6, _fancies_, _feigns_, _deems_, take three stresses. l. 11, after _man_. In line 7 I have added a comma at _smart_. In l. 10 I have substituted _handle_ for _reave_ of MS.: see note on _reave_, p. 101; and in l. 13, have hyphened _God made flesh_. No title in MS. 40.
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