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tion that any piece of writing should be independent of its title. The title may be lost, but the essay must be clear without it. There are many ways of beginning a lead in order to embody the feature in the first line. At first glance the operation of putting the emphasis of a sentence at the beginning, rather than at the end, may seem difficult, but with a clear idea of the rules of dependence in English grammar a reporter may transpose any clause to the beginning and thus play up the content of the clause. For instance, in this lead, | Fire, starting in a moving picture | |theatre, 4418 Third avenue, drove the | |tenants of the building out into the icy | |street while the snowstorm was at its | |height shortly before 12 o'clock last | |night. | the striking feature of the story is buried--we do not get the unusual picture of a little group of people shivering in the street during a blinding snowstorm while they watch their homes burn. A simple transposition of the _while_-clause puts the feature in the first line. Thus: | While the snowstorm was at its height | |shortly before 12 o'clock last night, | |fire, starting in a moving picture | |theatre, 4418 Third avenue, drove the | |tenants of the building out into the icy | |street. | The lead is not perfect now; it might be greatly improved, but it is better than before. A few of the possible beginnings for a lead are: 1. _Noun._--The simplest beginning of a lead is of course the use of a noun as subject of the principal verb. For example, "Fire destroyed the residence of----" or "A flashlight setting fire to a lace curtain started a fire----" or "The Plaza Hotel had a few uncomfortable moments last night----" etc. The subject of the verb may of course have its modifiers--adjectives and phrases--but it should not be separated too widely from its verb. One point is to be noted in the use of a simple noun at the beginning; an article should not precede the noun if it can be avoided, for the very simple reason that an article is not worth the important space that it takes at the beginning of the lead. In the case of fire no article is necessary. In other cases it is usually possible to put in an adjective or
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