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rth floor. His comrades tried to rescue him by lowering Fireman Henry Bond into the smoke by the heels; they were unsuccessful and Bond broke his arm in the attempt. The fire was confined to the lower floors of the two buildings and extinguished. In searching for MacBane, the firemen found him suffocated on the fourth floor where he had fallen. The feature of the story is evidently the one death and the three injuries. Our lead might be written as follows: | One fireman was suffocated and three | |other persons were injured in a fire in | |the Incandescent Light Company's plant, | |383-385 Sixth street, and an adjoining | |three-story building, late yesterday | |afternoon. | This lead would suggest to the reader many interesting details to come in the body of the story, and evidently the details are not all of equal importance. The story could be told in its logical order, but, since the death is more interesting than the origin of the fire and the injuries are more significant than how the fire spread, it is obvious that it would not be best to tell the story in the order in which it is told above. Disregarding the lead, we must cover the following details in the body of our story: Description of buildings and occupants. Origin of fire. Discovery of fire. Spread of flames. Injury of Mrs. Jones. Rescue of Hilda Schultz. Death of MacBane. Injury of Bond. Fire extinguished. This is the order in which things occurred at the fire. However, in our lead, we have drawn attention to our story by announcing that it concerns a fire in which a man was killed; the death therefore should have first place in the body of the story. Hence, in the second paragraph immediately after the lead, we must tell how MacBane fell through the skylight and was suffocated. Along with his death we may as well tell how Bond broke his arm trying to rescue MacBane. Our lead has also announced two other injuries and, hence, they must be included next--that is, our third paragraph must be devoted to the injury of Mrs. Jones and the rescue of the unconscious Hilda. But as yet our details are hanging in the air because we have not said anything about the buildings or the fire itself. In the next paragraph it would be well to describe the buildings and their occupants and to give a very
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