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Lead Beginning with a Phrase.=--Infinitive, participial, and prepositional phrases are valuable mainly for bringing out emphatic details. But the writer must be careful, particularly in participial constructions, to see that the phrases have definite words to modify. |To see if the bullet was coming was the reason | |Charlie Roberts, aged 7, 2626 Ninth Street, looked | |down his father's pistol barrel at 8:00 A.M. to-day.| |Playing with a rifle longer than his body, | |three-year-old Ernest Rodriguez, of Los Angeles, | |accidentally shot himself in the abdomen this | |morning and is dying in the county hospital. | |Almost blinded with carbolic acid, Fritz Storungot, | |of South Haven, groped his way to Patrolman Emil | |Schulz at Third Street and Brand Avenue last night | |and begged to be sent to the Emergency Hospital. | |With her hands and feet tied, Ida Elionsky, 16, swam| |in the roughest kind of water through Hell Gate | |yesterday, landing safely at Blackwell's Island. | =110. Lead Beginning with Absolute Construction.=--The absolute construction usually features causes and motives forcibly, but it should be avoided by beginners, as it is un-English and tends to make sentences unwieldy. The following illustrates the construction well: |Her money gone and her baby starving, Mrs. Kate | |Allen, 8 Marvin Alley, begged fifteen cents of a | |stranger yesterday to poison herself and child. | =111. Accuracy and Interest in the Lead.=--The two requirements made of the lead are that it shall possess accuracy and interest. It must have accuracy for the sake of truth. It must possess interest to lure the reader to a perusal of the story. Toward an attainment of both these requirements the reporter will have made the first step if he has organized his material rightly, putting at the beginning those facts that will be of most interest to his readers. =112. Clearness.=--But the reporter will still fail of his purpose if he neglects to make his lead clear. He must guard against any construction or the inclusion of any detail that is liable to blur the absolute clarity of his initial sentences. In particular, he must be wary of overloaded leads, those crowded with details. It is better to cut such leads into two or more short, crisp sentences than to permit them to be published with the p
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