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n desirable for the sake of brevity, but one must be sure never to omit a word or phrase unless precisely that word or phrase may be readily supplied from the context. =157. Clearness in the Sentence.=--After correct grammar, the next points to seek in writing the sentence are clearness and force, which together give a sentence its interest. Of the two, clearness is the more important. A reporter should never write a sentence that must be read twice to be understood. As has been said once or twice already, but may be repeated for emphasis, news stories to-day are read rapidly, and rapid reading is possible only when sentences yield their ideas with small effort on the part of the reader. Consider the following: |The Assembly on Thursday refused to pass the Grell | |Bill, permitting the sale of intoxicating liquors, | |after the close of the polls on election days, over | |the governor's veto. | This sentence is clear if one will stop to read it twice; but there is the trouble: one must read it twice--a task few will perform. =158. Grammatically Connected Phrases.=--The lack of entire clearness in the sentence just quoted is due to a difficulty over which the best writers often stumble,--failure to keep grammatically connected words, phrases, and clauses as close together as possible. In the sentence quoted, for instance, if the phrase _over the governor's veto_ were placed immediately after _pass_, the whole sentence would be clear at once to the reader. The same fault exists in the following: |The witness said she had a furnished bedroom for a | |gentleman 22 feet long by 11 feet wide. | =159. Correlative Conjunctions.=--The correlative conjunctions, _either ... or_, _neither ... nor_, _whether ... or_, and _not only ... but also_, are also particularly liable to trip a writer. Each should come immediately before the word or phrase it modifies. For example: |Either the prisoner will be hanged or sentenced to | |life imprisonment. | This sentence obviously is wrong. _Either_ here should come immediately before _hanged_, making the sentence read: |The prisoner will be either hanged or sentenced to | |life imprisonment. | =160. "Only" and "Alone."=--_Only_ and _alone_ belong in the same class of modifiers that demand close watching. _Only_ comes immed
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