you find in section 14?
Do you think a large part of section 30 a digression?
What do you think of the structure of sentences 4 and 8 in section 32?
Could you improve it by a change of punctuation?
What is the effect of the supposed case at the end of section 33? Is
it a fair deduction? Is it at the right place in the paragraph, and
why?
Where would you divide the paragraph in section 37?
Is the example in section 36 a fair one, and does it prove the case?
What is a very common method with Ruskin of connecting paragraphs?
Could you break up the sixth sentence of section 31 so that it would
be better?
If his audience had been hostile to him would he have been fortunate
in some of his assertions? Make an analysis of the whole essay. Does
he seem to you to have digressed from his topic? At what point? Should
it be two essays?
What led Ruskin into this long criticism of English character?
Could you include all the main topics that Ruskin has included, and by
a change in proportion keep the essay on the subject?
WEBSTER'S BUNKER HILL ORATION.
(Riverside Literature Series, No. 56.)
Number the paragraphs in this oration.
Why is paragraph 3 introduced?
What method of development is used in paragraph 7? In paragraph 8?
In how many paragraphs is the last sentence short?
In how many is the last sentence a repetition of the topic?
What purpose is served in paragraphs 8, 9, and 10?
In paragraph 12 note the use of contrast.
What kind of development in paragraph 27?
Analyze the oration from paragraph 28.
Does he place the topic sentence near the beginning of the paragraphs?
Does he frequently use transition sentences?
Do you think the outline of this as distinct as that of Macaulay's
Essay on Milton? Should it be?
What figure of speech in the word "axe" in paragraph 32, and "bayonet"
in paragraph 36?
What figure at the end of paragraph 40?
Does he use figures as frequently as Macaulay?
EXERCISES.
This year, taking up the study of exposition, offers especially good
opportunities for exercises in paragraph and sentence construction.
During the first eight or ten weeks the pupils will write isolated
paragraphs. The unity and arrangement of these should be carefully
criticised. Also the exercises should be arranged so that the pupils
will employ all forms of paragraphs. Before he begins to write a
paragrap
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