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hand, conjunctions are an annoyance when not needed. Just as guideposts along a road where there is no chance to leave the direct path are useless, and their recurrence is a cause of aggravation, so it is with unnecessary conjunctions. They attract attention to themselves, and so draw it from the thought. The first caution is, Do not use conjunctions unless needed. In the following, the repetition of _and_ is unnecessary and annoying. "Six shillings a week does not keep body and soul together very unitedly. They want to get away from each other when there is only such a very slight bond as that between them; and one day, I suppose, the pain and the dull monotony of it all had stood before her eyes plainer than usual, and the mocking spectre had frightened her. She had made one last appeal to friends, but, against the chill wall of their respectability, the voice of the erring outcast fell unheeded; _and_ then she had gone to see her child--had held it in her arms and kissed it, in a weary, dull sort of way, _and_ without betraying any particular emotion of any kind, _and_ had left it, after putting into its hand a penny box of chocolate she had bought it, _and_ afterwards, with her last few shillings, had taken a ticket _and_ come down to Goring. "It seemed that the bitterest thoughts of her life must have centred about the wooded reaches and the bright green meadows around Goring; but women strangely hug the knife that stabs them, and, perhaps, amidst the gall, there may have mingled also sunny memories of sweetest hours, spent upon those shadowed deeps over which the great trees bend their branches down so low. "She had wandered about the woods by the river's brink all day, _and_ then, when evening fell _and_ the gray twilight spread its dusky robe upon the waters, she stretched out her arms to the silent river that had known her sorrow and her joy. _And_ the old river had taken her into its gentle arms, _and_ had laid her weary head upon its bosom, _and_ had hushed away the pain." The other word is: When possible put the conjunction that connects two sentences into the body of the sentence, rather than at its beginning. In this way its binding power is increased. This principle should limit the use of _and_ and _but_ at the beginning of a sentence. Rarely is _an
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