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ed with white cord, and Condy unrolled his manuscript and read through what he had written. She approved, and, as he had foreseen, "caught on" to every one of his points. He was almost ready to burst into cheers when she said: "Any one reading that would almost believe you had been a diver yourself, or at least had lived with divers. Those little details count, don't they? Condy, I've an idea. See what you think of it. Instead of having the story end with his leaving her down there and going away, do it this way. Let him leave her there, and then go back after a long time when he gets to be an old man. Fix it up some way to make it natural. Have him go down to see her and never come up again, see? And leave the reader in doubt as to whether it was an accident or whether he did it on purpose." Condy choked back a whoop and smote his knee. "Blix, you're the eighth wonder! Magnificent--glorious! Say!"--he fixed her with a glance of curiosity--"you ought to take to story-writing yourself." "No, no," she retorted significantly. "I'll just stay with my singing and be content with that. But remember that story don't go to 'The Times' supplement. At least not until you have tried it East--with the Centennial Company, at any rate." "Well, I guess NOT!" snorted Condy. "Why, this is going to be one of the best yarns I ever wrote." A little later on he inquired with sudden concern: "Have you got anything to eat in the house?" "I never saw such a man!" declared Blix; "you are always hungry." "I love to eat," he protested. "Well, we'll make some creamed oysters; how would that do?" suggested Blix. Condy rolled his eyes. "Oh, speak to me of creamed oysters!" Then, with abrupt solemnity: "Blix, I never in my life had as many oysters as I could eat." She made the creamed oysters in the kitchen over the gas-stove, and they ate them there--Condy sitting on the washboard of the sink, his plate in his lap. Condy had a way of catching up in his hands whatever happened to be nearest him, and, while still continuing to talk, examining it with apparent deep interest. Just now it happened to be the morning's paper that Victorine had left on the table. For five minutes Condy had been picking it up and laying it down, frowning abstractedly at it during the pauses in the conversation. Suddenly he became aware of what it was, and instantly read aloud the first item that caught his glance: "'Personal.--Youn
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