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New York Central, Pennsylvania and Chesapeake and Ohio. [The reader might surmise that the words _Pennsylvania and Chesapeake and Ohio_ represent a single line or even three different lines.] Right: The railroads in question are the New York Central, Pennsylvania, and Chesapeake and Ohio. Confusing: For breakfast we had oatmeal, bacon, eggs and honey. [Omission of the comma after _eggs_ suggests a mixture.] Right: For breakfast we had oatmeal, bacon, eggs, and honey. =h. A comma should follow an expression like _he said_ which introduces a short quotation.= (For longer or more formal quotations use a colon.) Right: He shouted, "Come on! I dare you!" Right: Our captain replied, "We're ready." But for indirect quotations, a caution is necessary. Do not place a comma between a verb and a _that_ or _how_ clause which the verb introduces. Wrong: He explained, how the accident occurred. Right: He explained how the accident occurred. Wrong: The chauffeur told us, that the gasoline tank was empty. Right: The chauffeur told us that the gasoline tank was empty. =i. A comma is used to separate parts of a sentence which might erroneously be read together.= Confusing: Long before she had received a letter. Better: Long before, she had received a letter. Confusing: We turned the corner and the horse stopped throwing us off. Better: We turned the corner and the horse stopped, throwing us off. Confusing: Through the alumni gathered there went a thrill of dismay. Better: Through the alumni gathered there, went a thrill of dismay. Wrong: For a dime you can buy two pieces of pie or cake and ice cream. Right: For a dime you can buy two pieces of pie, or cake and ice cream. Right: The man whom everybody had for years regarded as a crank and a weakling, is now praised for his sagacity and his strength. Right: In a situation so critical as to require the utmost coolness of mind, he lost his wits completely. [Here the confusion might not be serious if the comma were omitted, but separation of the long introduction from the main clause is desirable.] =j. Do not use superfluous commas:= =1.= To mark a trivial pause: Needless use of comma: In the road, stood a wagon. Needless use of commas: The taki
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