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to consult before sending out his script:
Is my plot really fresh?
Could it be called a colorable imitation of any magazine story, book,
or play?
Is it strong enough?
Is it logical?
Does it suit the time of year?
Is the plot not only possible but _probable?_
Is the material desired by the producer to whom I am sending it?
Does the company make that style of story?
Are the points properly brought out, that others may see them as I do?
Can I make it better by altering it?
Will it pass the Censors?
Even if it does, will it offend even one spectator?
Do the synopsis and scenario match properly, or have I hinted at
action in my synopsis which is not adequately worked out in the
continuity? On the other hand, does the synopsis tell everything that
happens in the scenario?
Is it impracticable for the camera?
Have I introduced scenes that would cost too much to produce?
Is the cast too small?
Is it too large?
Finally, some anonymous writer has said: "Don't let go of your script
until you are positive that you have made every detail clear, that
your layout of scenes has told the story in self-explanatory action,
and that you have answered every prospective 'Why?'"
CHAPTER XI
THE SCENE-PLOT AND ITS PURPOSE
It has been said in an earlier chapter that it is optional with the
writer whether to submit a scene-plot with his complete script;
nevertheless, we believe that it is advisable.
_1. Why Prepare a Scene-Plot_
The reason is a plain one: Until the writer has become known as a
professional, it is the spirit in which the scene-plot is sent rather
than its actual value to either editor or director that counts in his
favor. It indicates his willingness to help both these busy men so far
as lies in his power; further, it shows that he is willing to do at
the beginning of his career that which he would never for a moment
think of leaving undone after his complete scripts are once in demand;
but, most of all, it shows that he has enough confidence in his work
to believe that--provided the story is acceptable--it will be produced
essentially as he has planned it.
Naturally, it often happens that the director adds scenes to those
planned by the author, and even oftener some of the author's scenes
are cut out; in either case, however, so much of the scene-plot as
remains unchanged will have its value. The author may feel that the
director's alterations are unwarranted,
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