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ng is attributed to Sir Boyle Roche: "Mr. Speaker, I smell a rat, I see him brewing in the air; but, mark me, I shall yet nip him in the bud." Some words, once metaphorical, have ceased to be so regarded. Hence many good writers say "_under_ these _circumstances_" instead of "_in_ these circumstances." An excessive regard for disused metaphor savours of pedantry: disregard is inelegant. Write, not, "_unparalleled_ complications," but "_unprecedented_ complications;" and "_he threw light on_ obscurities," instead of "_he unravelled_ obscurities." *14 a. Do not introduce literal statement immediately after Metaphor.* "He was the father of Chemistry, and brother to the Earl of Cork." "He was a very thunderbolt of war, And was lieutenant to the Earl of Mar." *14 b. Do not use poetic metaphor to illustrate a prosaic subject.* Thus, we may say "a poet _soars_," or even, though rarely, "a nation _soars_ to greatness," but you could not say "Consols _soared to_ 94-1/2." Even commonplace subjects may be illustrated by metaphor: for it is a metaphor, and quite unobjectionable, to say "Consols _mounted_, or _jumped_ to 94-1/2." But commonplace subjects must be illustrated by metaphor that is commonplace. ORDER OF WORDS IN A SENTENCE. *15. Emphatic words must stand in emphatic positions; i.e. for the most part, at the beginning or at the end of the sentence.* This rule occasionally supersedes the common rules about position. Thus, the place for an adverb, as a rule, should be between the subject and verb: "He _quickly_ left the room;" but if _quickly_ is to be emphatic, it must come at the beginning or end, as in "I told him to leave the room slowly, but he left _quickly_." Adjectives, in clauses beginning with "if" and "though," often come at the beginning for emphasis: "_Insolent_ though he was, he was silenced at last." *15 a. Unemphatic words must, as a rule, be kept from the end of the sentence.* It is a common fault to break this rule by placing a short and unemphatic predicate at the end of a long sentence. "To know some Latin, even if it be nothing but a few Latin roots, _is useful_." Write, "It is useful, &c." So "the evidence proves how kind to his inferiors _he is_." Often, where an adjective or auxiliary verb comes at the end, the addition of an emphatic adverb justifies the position, _e.g._ above, "is _very_ useful," "he has _invariably_ been." A short "chippy" ending, even tho
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