rildis]

9 She overhent, naught moved with her piteous look.

overhent > overtook; seized

210.19

But both her selfe, and eke her daughter deare,
2 Begotten by her kingly Paramoure,
The faire _Sabrina_ almost dead with feare,
4 She there attached, farre from all succoure;
The one she slew +in that impatient stoure+,
6 But the sad virgin innocent of all,
Adowne the rolling riuer she did poure,
8 Which of her name now _Seuerne_ men do call:
Such was the end, that to disloyall loue did fall.

5 in that impatient stoure > vpon the present floure _1590; i.e.
without further ado:_ present _= immediate;_ floure _= floor_

1 But both herself, and eke her daughter dear,

eke > also

2 Begotten by her kingly paramour,
3 The fair Sabrina, almost dead with fear,

Sabrina > (Or Sabre; she ultimately became the nymph of the Severn.
See Drayton's _Polyolbion_ and Fletcher's _Faithful Shepherdess_;
and _Comus_ 824 ff.)

4 She there attached, far from all succour;

attached > seized, laid hold of

5 The one she slew in that impatient stour,

stour > conflict, turmoil

6 But the sad virgin, innocent of all,
7 Adown the rolling river she did pour,

Adown > Down

8 Which of her name now Severn men do call:

of > by virtue of, in remembrance of
Severn > (Via _Sabrina, Savarina, Severn_)

9 Such was the end that to disloyal love did fall.

disloyal > disloyal, faithless; _also:_ illegal, ex-marital

210.20

Then for her sonne, which she to _Locrin_ bore,
2 _Madan_ was young, vnmeet the rule +to+ sway,
In her owne hand the crowne she kept in store,
4 Till ryper yeares he raught, and stronger stay:
During which time her powre she did display
6 Through all this realme, the glorie of her sex,
And first taught men a woman to obay:
8 But when her sonne to mans estate did wex,
She it surrendred, ne her selfe would lenger vex.

2 to > of _1596, 1609_

1 Then for her son (whom she to Locrin bore),

for > because

2 Maddan, was young, unmeet the rule to sway,

unmeet > unfitted
rule > dominion
sway > govern

3 In her own hand the crown she kept in store,
4 Till riper years he raught, and stronger stay:

raught > reached, attained
stay > staying power; self-control

5 During which time her power she did display

display > spread

6 Through all this realm, the glory of her sex,
7 And first taug