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r so poems in the book of his selected verse. Thus he writes in _I Found Her Out There_ of one who:-- would sigh at the tale Of sunk Lyonesse As a wind-tugged tress Flapped her cheek like a flail. There could not be an uglier and more prosaic exaggeration than is contained in the image in the last line. And prose intrudes in the choice of words as well as in images. Take, for example, the use of the word "domiciled" in the passage in the same poem about-- that western sea, As it swells and sobs, Where she once domiciled. There are infelicities of the same kind in the first verse of the poem called _At an Inn_:-- When we, as strangers, sought Their catering care, Veiled smiles bespoke their thought Of what we were. They warmed as they opined Us more than friends-- That we had all resigned For love's dear ends. "Catering care" is an appalling phrase. I do not wish to over-emphasize the significance of flaws of this kind. But, at a time when all the world is eager to do honour to Mr. Hardy's poems, it is surely well to refrain from doing equal honour to his faults. We shall not appreciate the splendid interpretation of earth in _The Return of the Native_ more highly for persuading ourselves that:-- Intermissive aim at the thing sufficeth, is a line of good poetry. Similarly the critic, if he is to enjoy the best of Mr. Hardy, must also be resolute not to shut his eyes to the worst in such a verse as that with which _A Broken Appointment_ begins:-- You did not come, And marching time drew on, and wore me numb,-- Yet less for loss of your dear presence there Than that I thus found lacking in your make That high compassion which can overbear Reluctance for pure loving kindness' sake Grieved I, when, as the hope-hour stroked its sum, You did not come. There are hints of the grand style of lyric poetry in these lines, but phrases like "in your make" and "as the hope-hour stroked its sum" are discords that bring it tumbling to the levels of Victorian commonplace. What one does bless Mr. Hardy for, however, both in his verse and in his prose, is his bleak sincerity. He writes out of the reality of his experience. He has a temperament sensitive beyond that of all but a few recent writers to the pain and passion of human beings. Especially is he sensitive to the pain and passion o
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