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the portrait. P. 119. has the line-- "And swearing 'til my very _roof_ was dry," transmogrified into-- "And swearing 'til my very _tongue_ was dry." Now, why "this lame and impotent conclusion?" What can be a more common expression than the "roof of the mouth?" and it is just the part which is most affected by a sensation of dryness and pricking, after any excitement in speaking, whereas the _tongue_ is not the member that suffers! In _As You Like It_, p. 127., in the line-- "Mistress dispatch you with your _safest haste_," the last two words are made "fastest haste," which, to say the least, are tautology, and are like talking, of the "highest height", or the the "deepest depth!" Surely, the original form of words, "Dispatch you with your _safest haste_;" that is, with as much haste as is consistent with your personal safety--is much more dignified and polished address from the duke to a _lady_, and at the same time more poetical! In p. 129., "The constant _service_ of the antique world," is converted into "The constant _favour_ of the antique world:" in which line I cannot discover any sense. If I might hazard a guess, I should suggest that the error is in the _second_ word, "service," and that it ought to be "servants:" "When _servants_ sweat for duty, not for meed." In the _Taming of the Shrew_, p. 143., the substitution of "_Warwickshire_ ale" for "sheer ale" strikes me as very far-fetched, and wholly unnecessary. There is no defect of sense in the term "_sheer_ ale." Sly means to say, he was "fourteen pence on the score for ale alone:" just as one speaks of "sheer nonsense," _i. e._ nothing but nonsense, "sheer buffoonery," "sheer malice," &c. Why should Sly talk of being in debt for _Warwickshire_ ale at Wincot? If he kind been drinking ale from Staffordshire, or Derbyshire, or Kent, he might possibly have named the county it came from; but to talk of _Warwickshire_ ale within a few miles of Stratford-on-Avon seems absurd. It is as if a man came from Barclay and Perkins's, and talked of having been drinking "_London_ porter." In p. 144., I submit, with great deference, that turning "Aristotle's checks" into "Aristotle's ethics" is the very reverse of an improvement. What can be more intelligible than the line-- "And so devote to Aristotle's _checks_;" that is, to the checks which Aristotle's rules impose upon profligacy? The idea is more poetical, {452} and the line
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